Kia ora, I am a student at Belfast School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share and Grow.
Thursday, June 6, 2019
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I like the way you made the cupcake sing. Did you think about how cupcakes don't sing they scream.[sometimes] I think you should try to be more steady with the camera.
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Hi Ryleigh it's Millie, I really like your cupcake because of the bright rainbow colours that stood out. I also really liked that you drew stuff around it to make it look cooler. It reminded me of when I drew something like this. Next time take a picture over the cupcake because it is quite far away so you can't see it much otherwise I really liked it. How long did it take you to do?
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