Kia ora, I am a student at Belfast School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share and Grow.
Friday, May 24, 2019
A day in a life of a giant
from ryleigh
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Hi Ryliegh,
ReplyDeleteYour slide show is really funny and i love all the decriptive words. It reminded me of when we first read the story and how haertwarming it as. maybe next time reread your post before you post it because there was some words you missed out like to and the. but do not worry because i loved bit where it said "THESE NOODLES ARE TO SMALL MAKE THEM BIGGER"
Kai pia Willow!!!! :)