Kia ora, I am a student at Belfast School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share and Grow.
Friday, September 18, 2020
MY Disney character
This Is my Disney character That I made It is Ariel the mermaid but I made her a human Teenager. I used Avatar Maker Its is really fun. She is in the middle out of Girly and Tomboy
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Hello Ryleigh! I love your disney character you did! Its really cool and detailed! I really like how you did ariel tho it looks just like her! Bye!
ReplyDeleteNice job Ryleigh. i like how you took something that already existed and made something new out of it. Maybe next time you could make the speech bubbles neater because there a bit all over the place. This reminds me on when I tried to make Manu from the wayfinder using a drawing and instructions someone else made. why did you make her? Keep up the good work,bye.
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Ryleigh,
ReplyDeleteI really like how extravagant your Disney character and how it is made from an already made Disney character, it is a bit rough around the edges like how the speech bubbles are a bit sad and the words are all sideways and stuff but although it could use a bit of a touch up it is really cool!
-Alice
Hi Ryleigh,
ReplyDeleteI really like your Disney character mainly because its based off another real character.
This reminded me of the time I made a Disney character.
Next time you could maybe make it more neater and make the words bolder and smaller.
[Question(s)] Did you have fun making this? How long would you say it took? Were you happy with was the character came out like?
Would you make a character again?
Well this was amazing work. Keep it up!
Your darling friend,
-Jennifer