This is my Advertisement about Australia I might have stopped for a bit it's cause I was having a Breather. Bye bye have a good rest of your day.
Monday, August 16, 2021
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Hi Ryleigh,
ReplyDeleteI like that you took this task seriously and put a great effort in researching into Australia. Your post is full of useful information. You also shared your personal opinions about multiple things in Australia. Good job! Have you visited Australia before?
Next time, I suggest that you could put more photos of Australia's famous landmarks and local foods so that we can have an idea of what they look like. Also, consider cutting your slides into multiple short paragraphs or maybe key words only, then back them up with your verbal explanation so that the readers can easily get to the main point.
Bonjour Miss Helen,
DeleteThank you for commenting on my blog, this is a very nice comment you put up, Thank you for some feedback on this blog post, I do need help sometimes with my blog posts or my work I post.
Bye!
Good Morning Ryleigh,
ReplyDeleteI loved how big the big the paragraphs were in the presentation. I was supposed to go to Australia so when I will this would be helpful. Next time you could speak I little more clearly and loudly. How long did this take you to make and what were the tools you used to make it?
Bye :)