This is my sailing post when we went sailing in week 8 term one
Kia ora, I am a student at Belfast School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share and Grow.
Tuesday, April 13, 2021
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Hi Ryleigh,
ReplyDeleteI like this blog post you have made. I like the amount of writing you have done on every slide. I like how you made a slide of all the different steps and things you had to do. Maybe next time you could add in some photos. Did you have fun? Would you go sailing again? Have a good day.
-Trinity
Hey Ryleigh
ReplyDeleteI love the amount of writing you did and i like how you said the colours of the boats.Next time could you maybe add some photos.who was in your team? would you go to lake Rua again?
Hi Ryleigh,
ReplyDeleteI really like how you've put each different thing you did into a different slide.
This is amazing because you added in everything we did at the lake.
Did you think about adding pictures?
Maybe next time you could more detail?
-Jennifer