Kia ora, I am a student at Belfast School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share and Grow.
Wednesday, April 7, 2021
2 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Tena Koe Ryleigh!
ReplyDeleteI love how detailed you did this post, it is very well done.
Maybe you could've added what we did on Friday/the last day of camp?
Other then that i I liked everything about it!
From,
Jennifer
Hey Ryleigh your blog is really great and amazing but it is really hard to know it's the end of the slide because it doesn't say when it has finished so you could of said "the end" or "this is the end of my blog post" or "hope you like it"
ReplyDeletebut it is really good other wise.
-Alice