Kia ora, I am a student at Belfast School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share and Grow.
Tuesday, December 10, 2019
Facts about lorde
This is my Facts about lorde there are a lot of interesting facts I almost interested myself, that it was so Interesting It was quit fun and Exciting to make a profile, page for lorde. I used shapes and and some colours to made It look fun and exciting to read. from Ryleigh
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Hi Ryleigh, I can see that you have spent a lot of time on this activity and your DLO really stands out. I have learnt some interesting things about Lorde that I did not know. Next time can you remember to change the words into your own words so that you are able to say that the work is entirely your own. Mrs Wing
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