Kia ora, I am a student at Belfast School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share and Grow.
Friday, August 20, 2021
Lockdown Writing/Winter learning Journey
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Hi Ryleigh, You found lots of good information about Benee. I've seen her perform as well and she was really good! Which ones are your favourite songs by Benee? Have a great day. From Mrs Hobbs.
ReplyDeleteHi Mrs Hobbs,
DeleteThanks for this comment, My favourite songs from Benee is Find an Island, and Supa loney cause she wrote supa lonely in lockdown.
Thanks Ryleigh!
Kia ora Ryleigh,
ReplyDeleteIt is great to see you doing some Writing at home. I can see you have lots of facts about Benee. I have never heard of her before.
Next time you could make a poster on Google Draw so you can add some images of Benee.
Stay safe,
Miss McCombie
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Hi Ryleigh,
ReplyDeleteI really like this post, its very unique and interesting. I'm a fan of Benee's to! My favourite song is Supa Lonely as well. Mainly because she see's herself in that perspective and talks about in throughout the song.
Whats your favourite thing about Benee?
I liked how you explained the process and number 1 hits that gained her tons of fans.
Next time you could maybe do a slide or as Miss McCombie said: A google draw. Even a factile would be great.
This was a great post and i learned quite a few things from it.
Keep up the good work and outstanding effort!
-Jennifer